I Hide And Lie

by Kristina   Oct 19, 2006


I'm forced to live a lie,
And hide behind a fake smile,
So nobody will see,
What's really wrong with me.

I choose to hide my feelings,
And go on with my day,
Pretend that I'm okay,
In every single way.

The real me is to painful,
For this world to see,
They would not understand,
The things that I believe.

The pressure is building up,
So deep within inside,
I'm gonna end up,
Exploding sometime.

I really cant take it no more,
I feel to much pain.
I don't know why I'm still holding on,
When all I wanna do is let go.

Copyright © November 22, 2005 - Kristina M

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    That's really sad, but it's beautiful. you're an amazing writer! i love the part where it's like...
    "The real me is to painful,
    For this world to see,
    They would not understand,
    The things that I believe."
    that part really got to me, but in a good way! great job!! 5/5!

    *Shawte*

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The words you use are so unique.

    i gave it a 5. excellent. the story to this poem was very touching. i loved it a lot.

    david

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    I liked it......though it seemed like in the first couple of stanzas you wanted to rhyme. Its still a 5/5

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    I think this poem is fantastic. I know somewhat how you feel. Maybe different situations but I can honestly say I get you according to the words you speak. Things like this really mean allot to me. I like to see such truth. I really liked how you rhymed too.

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    You knwo what would be great with this!? a song, if you made this somehow into a song this would be amazing!!! this is a great poem i thought it was great! 5/5

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