Soul Struggle

by Jason   Oct 22, 2006


Daemonic horde ushering from fiery gates
Terror and destruction in its wake
Heavenly host charging to meet
Joining together in strife
Angelic and daemonic dancing in chaos
A soul caught in the maelstrom
Light and dark meet
Shadows begin to unfold
A path hewn by the sword
Into the grey between
Away from this melee of ideals
Observing that which is now rejected
New destiny to be created
A soul struggles on

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jane Lowe

    Haha, hello Jason.
    Thank you very much for your comment on "Hells trap". It was rather humerous and cought my fancy, thank you very much! Deff made me smile, and traps are harder to avoid than you think, it's like they ly in waiting for the perfect opportunity to embarrase you! :P

    This poem is quite good, i enjoyed reading it! Going to read more!!!

    - Lanie.

  • 17 years ago

    by PS

    Very nice. the struggle is represented well and the word choice is awesome. great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    WOW Jason and you said you were new at writing? Well, if so you have a natural talent for poetry. This is incredible! Powerful, great rhythm, and an intriguing choice of words... Awesome piece! ;o)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I really love the words u used very creative and i was enjoy very excellent job god bless

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I like this-it is original and flows well with a great use of language.The meaning is fantastic and well stated-our souls always struggle between good and evil, right and wrong.We can only do the best we can while being true to ourselves.Life is a constant struggle.

    Peace, Poetry, & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

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