Truthful tales

by kelly tavern   Oct 24, 2006


We've had our ups and downs
i know Ive hurt you too
I'm hurting too
i cry myself to sleep
night after night
wishing things were different
wishing we was together
holding each other and talking
i miss the talks we used to have
sometimes silly but mostly serious
i miss the cuddles and the jokes we used to share
i cant change what i did
i wish i could
someday if there is a god
i hope you will forgive me
all thats left to say is
i love you now and always will no matter what?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Faceless Mirror

    Just some minor errors regarding grammar, like for example: i = I // cant = can't // Ive = I've // we was = we were etc.

    And it would be nice if you gave the reader a chance to breathe by using a period now and then. Or at least a little more punctuation.

    Otherwise a good write. Keep it up. :-)

    -Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror.

  • 17 years ago

    by monika

    Good poemm!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by monika

    Good poemm!!!

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