You can tell him he's a lost cause in my book.

by ALEX   Oct 24, 2006


No one else knows what he has. done.
no one else cares what he's begun.
a storm of doubt to cross her mind.
a storm of answers she can't find.
help be sent from up above.
help her try to find true love.
miserable, now she may be.
miserable, that girl is me.
deceit and loneliness she pays the price.
deceit, his heart has turned to ice.
to leave her with less than a memory.
to leave her empty, he's not even sorry.

10/24/06

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    It was very nicly written!
    loved the ending of the poem!
    it had lots of emotions...
    you really got the talent in writting poems!
    keep it up always...

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Another good one 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Help be sent from up above.
    ((me not be))

    Very nice poem to potray feeling. And, you are never an idiot for falling in love. Unless...it isn't true love.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Nice poem, very nicely written

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