Have you ever been so in love?

by SaveMe?   Oct 25, 2006


Have you ever been so in love?
That you'd give everything you could
Just to see him smile
Just to know he would

Have you ever been so in love?
That you feel a mind of one
You can't bear to be without
Like a flower without the sun

Have you ever been so in love?
That you'd never leave his side
And know it'll all be okay
When he dries the tears you've cried

Have you ever been so in love?
That you couldn't breathe without
He is your life your air your sun
There's nothing he'd lie about

Have you ever been so in love?
A thousand leagues you'd march
To tell that you need him
And he'll always have your heart

Have you ever been so in love?
One kiss can make your day
And a tiny little hug
Can wash your worries away

Have you ever been so in love?
You'd die so he'd live free
And you would never leave him
Not in all eternity

Have you ever been so in love?
That nothing else matters to you
Than that he loves you back
And you'll always love him too

Have you ever been so in love?
He can make you cry with joy
And you know that he's "the one"
He most than just "a boy"

Have you ever been so in love?
Your heart to him you'd give
When you trust him with your life
Trust him with everything

I know I have
I know I am
And always will be
Tom im forever yours
Xxx

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  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    I luv it. it was makin me happy just reading it because i love someone that much i just dont know how to tell him :P
    i luv the way you worded it and the repetition of the line "have you ever been so in love?" works real well in the flow of the poem, great work

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Koreena

    Aw..it was beautiful, it really was. Me and my bf just broke up but i can still relate! :( but anyway, wonderful!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    It made me smile because as I read it I was thinking of my gorgeous bf, Brad. your poem expressed how I feel for him perfectly. Im happy that you have found someone who makes you so happy because I understand you have been hurt recently through your poetry. Hold onto your love and cherish it, keep it close to your heart and never forget it's there or it could wilt.
    Love,
    Bethan xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    I lov it...i can't say it any better. keep writing:)

  • 17 years ago

    by bubbles

    That is da cutest most romantic poem!