Take this love. Take it to the grave.

by SaveMe?   Aug 31, 2006


Take this love
Take it to the grave
Bring this knife
Ill be brave

Fill me up
And drown me so
The lights go out
I just let go

Your hand was beating
So fast and slow
You plunged me in dark
Im dead I know

My eyes still flicker
My finger gives a twitch
Bleeding wounds
For an unsociable b.itch

You broke the line
Between me life
You told me
Id be your wife

You made those promises
Outside in they went
You didn\\\' realise
Promises are meant to be kept

I love you he said
Ill never hurt or cheat
Id found my true love
He is oh so sweet

Was that a lie?
Or not an intention?
Don\\\'t shy away
Whenever it\\\'ss mentioned

You did it
You can\\\'t change the past
The future doesn\\\'t exist
Only the present really lasts

Take me
My love
Take me
To my grave

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  • 17 years ago

    by tom

    Uuh, now i feel like shit, seriously your poems are killing me, they are soo good that they can reduce a man to tears>>>>>me! im crying, im so sorry i made you feel this way, i thought you knew i loved you, but reading this has made me wonder! i will always love you though, dont you dare think for 1 minuite that i dont,
    otherwise good poem, spellings arent what makes a poem good, its what the poem does to you that matters!
    all my love tom
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by ღ_Bethany_ღ

    Hehe thats so beautiful! jus like u! lol u seriously r a good writer, betta than me! n i can relate 2 ur poems so well! xxxBETHxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    GR8 poem, real deep. Kisty pamer said it all. ur poems git bitter each time i read. good job:)

    xoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow! this is such a powerful poem, and you write it so well.. you have som much talent.. great flow, great topic.. percetly writte piece!5/5..
    Best Wishes..
    Please can you rate and comment on my poems, Thanks..
    Kirsty Palmer xXx