As I lay dying

by dancingskeletons   Oct 25, 2006


As I lay here crying,
deep inside my soul is dying.
There is a knife on the table,
but I don't think I'm able
to go deep enough,
there is just too much stuff.
I can't ignore, I want more.
More bruises and more cuts,
some people think I'm going nuts
So, I drag the knife across my skin
and I pray that I will win.
And now as I lay here crying,
I know that my heart and soul are dying.

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  • 17 years ago

    by dancingskeletons

    Thanks guys, i love getting feedback for my poetry. love ya-dancingskeletons

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Emotions very well expressed in this poem... A dark and powerful piece! Enjoyed the read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Very very sad and dark, emotions are well expressed.

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 17 years ago

    by softmember

    I was scard at first for real 9/10
    keep up the good job girl excelent if i was a teacher i will give u an A-

  • 17 years ago

    by DeadGirl AKA Becka

    Hey!! you know who this is!! It's ur best friend!!! well anyway my comment.....It's really good, keep the poetry going girl!!! Luvs DeadGirl

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