My Love Wish....

by King of The Elements   Oct 25, 2006


I remember the first time you said you loved me
I swear my heart stopped
I said it back
But not as a wisecrack

Every time day after that we said it
It was a song that never got boring
I felt like an eagle soaring

We went everywhere together
Our friends never complained
Sharing feelings,thought and goals
I had never felt so comfortable

The day I made my mistake I'll never forget
I made you mad
Reason gone
Ran out in the middle of the road and a car came

I cant think about anything else
the day we said I love you meant more than ever now
My first love, best friend now gone
Prone from now in the ground

My crying has never stopped
My anger at myself has never ceased
All I want is you back to find peace

*~* if this makes no sense plz tell me what i need to correct it much thx*~*~

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  • 17 years ago

    by Savanha

    Wow babe... leave it as it is... i love it.. and i know it means so much to you. never change it to make it make sense for others, as long as it makes perfect sense to you...

    5/5

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