No Sad Goodbye

by Deana   Oct 25, 2006


No sad goodbye
With tear filled eyes

You left in the darkness
Like a thief in flight
The heart of a coward
Who would run not fight

No voice to speak
Or state a reason
Maybe your forever
Only lasts one season

Beautiful words without conviction
Sweet stories told in fiction
Dreams cast away,like pollen in wind
A heart left broken,trying to mend

Not important enough to say goodbye
Your love,your words ,all just lies
Moonlit nights,now just dreams
No vows of love,no song to sing

Someday when you lay down
And begin to cry
When I so gently come to mind
This time stop and in the night

Whisper a sad goodbye
with tear filled eyes

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    I also like the words you used and it is sad. A great poem 5/5 :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Deena,
    How beautiful and yet so sad. I really loved this poem. The words choices were great. It really was heart felt. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Beautiful words without conviction
    Sweet stories told in fiction
    Dreams cast away,like pollen in wind
    A heart left broken,trying to mend"

    The stanza that stood out for me.. i can't pin point why this poem has really hit me hard, but it has...
    Very well written as always.. i wouldn't expect anything worth less than a five from you =) (I think thats phrased right =)
    so 5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Thanks for taking time to read my poem :) your a really good writer 5.5 I look forward to reading more

  • 17 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Awh, you do it again. Beautiful, sorry i ahven't comment in a while, i've been "busy" with "stuff" but when i read this i had to. it was so beautiful and acctually brought tears to my eyes.
    love you doll
    -amberinaa*

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