Cleansing Tear

by Twisted Heart   Oct 26, 2006


Upon the land of distant dreams
Inside the calming of the storm
Lies the embers of sweet fantasies
In which a tear is formed.

Not just a teardrop that is placed
Upon the thoughts of love anew
But with the fall of gentle grace
Of a heart that's broke in two.

Silent comes the tender weeping
Mindless of the crushing heart
Aided by the hunger, sleeping
Beneath the soul that's torn apart.

Sweet harmony of love's remorse
Comes now into the dead of night
Surging with an able force
It leads the solemn into light.

In grief, no longer will it tarry
Behold the fight, that's left its mark
With strength it picks up and carries
The pieces of a broken heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    You are so amazing with how your mind works to create such deep yet understandable (after you read it twice! lol) thoughts. It's a talent!
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    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    I like the rhythm that knits this very thought provoking piece that Ive enjoyed reading,
    I especially like the last stanza, it holds so much story and thought.
    well done.