Lonliness

by miss melancholy   Oct 26, 2006


I'm running, I'm going so slow,
there coming up, they're beginning to show,
the dark Shadow envelopes, i start to fly,
why is this happening?
i now start to cry.

stop! i shout, but nothing is heard,
please! i scream, no one says a word,
eyes watch, but no one helps,
while i keep screaming,
pleas and yelps.

and I'll keep on screaming until i shout myself hoarse,
until my hair is salted with tears, tangled and coarse,

but nobody will help,
i can't say i know why,
they're not scared,
they just don't want to try.

i guess I'm just worthless,
I'll stop shouting now,
I'll just be lonely,
that i know how.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tamsin

    This is my favourite of all the poems of yours I have read. You really found the way to portray your emotion through your words.
    well done 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    There was REALLY great figurative terms in here. I mean it painted such a vivid picture...it just blew my mind. Really, seriouly, that was VERY good! Very sad, but VERY good. Definately keep it up. 5/5
    ~Jules

  • 17 years ago

    by Liarr

    Why the hell are you dressing in colors then?? i like it though

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