Fallen from grace

by XxFallenxFromxGracexX   Oct 28, 2006


Hands cupped around her face
She weakly falls to the ground
Shes an angel thats fallen from grace
Slowly, without making a sound

No one saw it coming
Even now they just dont see
Her pain was so numbing
And all she wanted was to be free

She laughed and joked
Plastered on that fake smile
But on her tears she choked
She knew she could only hold on for a while

Tell her why she feels like this
Why shes always sad and down
When her life was meant to be bliss
This angels face wasnt made to frown

So on the ground this angel will wait
Until someone notices shes there
Proves to her that this isnt her fate
And that some one really does care

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  • 17 years ago

    by Danni

    I thought that it was good and it really captures the way an angel looks down on someone. Great work! 5/5
    ~Danni~

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought this was really sad.
    It was a joy to read, but the flow was off in a couple of places.
    Apart from that, you did a wonderful job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow this is such a good poem. it has alot of emotion into it. i love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I've read a few poems on this subject before (a sad angel) so that wasn't all that new to me. I liked the first stanza, that was the best part of the poem. It was an emotional write, however, I feel the rhyming was predictable.

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is a really good poem, the beginning really grabs you and makes you read the whole thing, The flow and meaning were great and the poem overall was excellent 5/5

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