As I Walked Across This Bridge Of Dreams

by Kalgalath   Nov 1, 2006


As I walked across this bridge of dreams
I see such wonderful things
My world is on fire
I never want it to transpire
If the fire were to die,
Then I would surely cry
Nobody would know
It would be, to them, like a show

You are at the end waiting for me
As I look over the edge,
I see such beauty

Over to the side
Is a star-reflected pool
I use it as a guide
So that I am not a fool

The water is clear from the moonlight and pure
I see images
That are like a cure

We are holding one another
Whispering back and forth
Our thoughts we try to cover
Because they want to go north

North is where the bridge of dreams lay
Where snow falls everyday
Such beautiful snow
You wouldn't know
Because only my angels gleam
And only my angels glow
On my bridge of dream and show

We are laughing and care not who's listening
I lean over and give you a kiss
Your eyes are glistening
You light up with a little more bliss

Nights are days,
Days are nights
My world is turned around
Yet, that is what makes it beautiful?

Not caring is a wonderful thing
Wouldn't you say?
Caring for you, and a broken wing
That, I could care for forever and a day

You are my lover
And I yours
I hope you never have another
Because then my heart will have sores

I am not lost
Because I have you
As I trace away the frost
My path is renewed

As I walked across this bridge of dreams
Many wonderful things have I seen
Wonderful things that will never be
Because it was only a dream

Alternate ending

As I walked across this bridge of dreams
Many wonderful things have I seen
Wonderful things that seem to good to be true
Even as I stand here with you

(The parts that do not ryhme aren't supposed to and if i was reading it, it would make a lot more sense and not seem so forced)

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  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    Your rhymes seem very forced. This is not as good as the previous one I read of yours. Please try to revise those rhymes and I think you will have more success. You have very meaningful themes though.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I agree with what some other people said. The flow and rhyming seemed to be a bit off.

    Other than that though, I found it really sweet. It's a shame the way it ended, I was shocked!

    Good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I enjoyed this, I thought the wording and imagery were amazing.
    I found the flow to be off in a couple of places, but apart from that, I really liked it.
    I also liked the alternate ending better than the first one.
    P.S I didn't get your comment, I think the site stole it o.O

  • 17 years ago

    by Imperfect

    I love this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    It didn't really flow all that good, and your rhyming was a little forced... in some places it rhymed and in some places it didn't. i liked the idea though. maybe just go back and tweek a few things.

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