Daddy

by Kristina   Nov 2, 2006


Daddy your my hero,
I'm glad I have you,
When mommy is going crazy,
I know I can always come to you.

You're the perfect dad,
A daughter can have,
You've always been here for me,
When I was sad.

You always lend me,
Your shoulder to cry on,
You're always here for me,
When I'm feeling down.

I'm so lucky to have you,
Here in my life.
I don't know what I would do,
Without you by my side.

Copyright © February 14, 2006 - Kristina M

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, another amazing poem, such a great talent............5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    Aww this is really sweet! i dont have that great of a relationship with my dad, but this poem conveys so much emotion and love....
    i noticed it was in the misc. section....i would probably put it in the family section(?)

    cyas!
    Emmm

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I agree with Gar. Too many "you" 's. It made the poem seem cliche and uninteresting. The flow was way off again, and could be improved with the changing of the words. Instead of the word 'you', you could replace some with 'daddy' or just change the stanzas all together. If you put more emotion of how you feel towards your dad, it would add a lot to the poem. =) Please don't take any of this personal. I just thought that some people should get some honest opinions about their work =P 4/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Aww, this poem made me smile. At times I feel this way about my dad too (not at others... but we won't get into that) Great write! Keep up the good work!

    xxEvilAngelxx

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