My Dream♥

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Nov 2, 2006


[[This is the future I would love to go down and live in. So if you don`t like it dont vote on it or comment on it. This poems means ALOT to me!]]

Weaving my life together
Trying to make sense
Of what it's suppose to be about
And what I come across
Is my past, present and future
The past
To guide me through the present
The present to live upon
And the future to reach for
To plan things
To grow and to become
What I need to be to become what I want to be
When I close my eyes
I see me getting married to a man
That cares and
Loves me for who I am
A man who would protect his family
Having my own children
To be happy about and to teach them
To take different roads that would make their
Life alot easier
Getting a house in Montana, a farm
Having horses, cats, dogs, and cows
And a beautiful two story house
Painted white with sky blue shudders
Beside the windows
A all-around porch around the house
With a porch swing, plants and
A "welcome" house mat on the floor before the door
A tire swing in the front yard
With a few trees that the kids can climb
And in the back lies
A garage that holds my truck and my husband's vehicle
With a loft above it
That I have placed my grandmother
Because I am afraid to leave her
I dream of my kids to be talented in their own way
To believe they are beautiful and handsome
To not be afraid of what to show who they are
And to express their feelings in a calm voice
And to love others as themselves
To know me and my husband will always be there for them
And that we will always love them for who they are
I can't wait to tell them
To focuse on school first, then college
Then other stuff
Like getting a girlfriend/boyfriend
Or out to drink if they're of age
I am determined to be a great mother
To always be there for them
To always tell them words of advice when they need it
And to love them and my husband like no other
This is my dream
I've always wanted
And will always dream of

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  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Oh, and i think you summed up every girls' perfect fantasy, and you did it wonderfully!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    ShuTTers
    Beside the windows
    AN all-around porch around the house
    focus

    I am determined to be a great mother
    To always be there for them
    To always tell them words of advice when they need it
    And to love them and my husband like no other
    ^ So i'm sorry was about your mother? and fate? thought so!

    job well done!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    This was a very well thought out and picture perfect poem. I do have one suggestion though: You may want to put it into stanzas and add more punctuation so that it can be easier for the reader to follow. Overall, I think that this is a wonderfull poem and even if I didn't who am I to crush your dreams. 5/5 Keep up the wonderful work hun.

    Best wishes
    Letty

    P.S. I am sorry that it took me so long to return your comments, but I have been very busy with family matters and such lately.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashla

    Awww.. 100/5. Your a great writer! I love your poems. I really liked this one cuz it showed how much you think the future holds for you!

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    This really seems like a perfect future and I would love for mine to somewhat like that! Incredible imagery aswell!

    xxEvilAngelxx