Falling Star

by Marcus   Nov 3, 2006


When the night comes
Look at the sky
If you see a falling star
Don't wonder why

Just make a wish
Trust me, it will come true
Because i did it
And i found you

Marcus

(A little poem for my fiancee, i love you!)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Wow, such positive emotions expressed in so little words, that takes skill. i think you exhibit a talent in this poem. all i can say is it is beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Aww again its holds so much..greattttt jobbbbbb

  • 17 years ago

    by Mystic Enchantress

    Wow this is amazing !!!!!! short and sweet. the words are powerful.
    keep up the great job!5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Awwwwwwwww that was so cute love it
    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    This is cute! i like how it was nice and short but still definitely got the message across. now if only there was a falling star for me.....lol great job and keep it up!
    >Emily@->-

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