Well done 5/5

Very deep and emotional. sad too at the same time. i enjoyed the flowand structure too! keep it up!
nuff luv xx

Very well done. great poem. 5/5 definetly. keep up the good work.
.x

Wow..gr8 poem..so meaningfull....if yu dont understand them the first time its always to try a second time:D
gr8 writes
keep up the gr8 job
5/5

Great poem 5/5 i love tha wordin.. keep up tha great work.. n thnx for commentin mine 2
xDx

Aw, this was a beautiful piece. It seems very heartfelt and flowed ever so nicely.
marcella

Very good poem, this is one of ur best. (in my opinion)

Great poem!
I have felt that way once and I think you describe it very well.
Nicely done!