The Awn

by Kalgalath   Nov 3, 2006


I am at the awn of your blade
Waiting for the blood to flow
As I start to fade,
I get hit with a killing blow

I had been causing you affliction
Some way or another
You had an addiction
Like none other

I thought I had been suffering
Because of your frigid heart
Apparently you had done nothing
That you would take part

I had wanted to run my blade through you
Before you ran yours through me
You could start life anew
In a world and land of glee

So as I am lying here,
Wondering what I did
You raise your sword to your ear
And bring it down upon my head

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow amazing work! this was really detailed and good! keep up the great work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    WOW.....that was excellent.
    The imagery was brilliant, and alot of it creeped me out, the wording and flow were amazing, and I liked the ending.
    It was so unexpected and orinigal, and it was my favourite part.

  • 17 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    :-O

    Okay, that was... kind of shocking, the way that it ended in a vision of gore. At first i didn't understand the raise your sword to your ear part, and then... *wince* well, that was some imagery...

    //T.L.//

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