Take my love, take my soul.

by in spite of love   Nov 4, 2006


Sweet bitter love; My poison.
My soul is torn in two,
Still wishing on a fallen star,
Why can't I be with you?

Distant traces of our love,
Still coursing through my veins,
Heaven only ever knew,
You put me through such pain.

This emptiness inside me,
Feeding on my soul,
This emptiness still burning,
Love... it takes it's tole.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Very nice..good meter

  • 17 years ago

    by girl

    Omg i love this poem your awsome! also a 5/5 i would give you a 10 if i could but sadly life doesn't think we should give people ten's lol!

  • 17 years ago

    by mellmer

    Hey ror this is really good i love it :)

    xoxo
    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A beautiful poem. it's rare to find poets with a rhyming ability such as this without sounding corny or cheesy. You did this well...loved the last line! Jpoet*

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