By myself

by xxmichaelxx   Nov 4, 2006


I imagine myself alone
but do i really feel at home?
home by myself with nobody else
just feeling like I'm living in hell

all by myself without you
i ask myself what more can i do?
to help myself get out of this situation
and try to forget about all the depression

I'll try my best to stay alone
but do i really feel at home?
i swear, no
i just wish it'll be alright though

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    Thats another really good poem. All of the ones I've wrote is how I feel or something that has acually happened in my life...anyways great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Hey this was a good poem but it seemed incomplete...like it needed more. But it was still a great write, I liked it. I'm sorry I haven't commented in a long time, I'm so busy I rarely have time to get on here anymore...I missed your poetry.
    5.5
    Breanna

  • 17 years ago

    by вℓєє∂ιиg.тєαяѕ ♥

    Hmm. This can definetely be improved. The flow is a little off because some of you lines are different lengths than the others. I also think it would benefit if you paid more attention to the rhyme scheme. Maybe use more less used rhymes.. Also, I think the descriptions could be improved. Add more detail in. Other than that, nice job. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Hey, i like this poem of your alot.
    Your rhymes are good but a little cliche.
    Pay attention to your capital letters at the start of every new line. other than that, its great.
    Keep it up, you have alot of potential.

    4/5

    ~Murder.

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