Connected things

by Hebe   Nov 4, 2006


Stars are shining
it is dark
nothings light up but the stars
silence
wind is blowing
it is cold
nothings howl but the wind
fear
clouds are passing by
there are shadows
nothings moving but the clouds
loneliness
water is flowing
there are whisperings
nothings changing but the water
All those things they are connected
by the meaning of abandonment

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  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Descriptive portraying a sad feeling nice work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is another beautiful piece from you. There is still room for improvement but overall it is 5/5. do some work on the last line, it needs to be better. keep it up

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this piece is greatly written. You created very vivid imagery, and your choice of words is excellent. I like the form of the poem, too.
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Rach

    This is a really nice poem, great effort and thought put into it

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    I luv the thought u put into this poem!!
    nicely done:D
    never stop writing:D
    bree! tk care

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