What Would Daddy Do?

by Raychel   Nov 5, 2006


What would daddy do,
If he knew what I did?
If he knew that I\'m not
His same darling little kid?

What would daddy do,
If he knew I wanted to die?
What would he say,
Would he have to cry?

What would daddy do,
If he saw how these boys have treated me?
Would he tell me things were okay,
Or would he kick their a..es til they couldnt see?

What would daddy do,
If he knew I cut myself?
What would daddy say,
When he found out I needed help?

Would daddy still love me the same,
If he knew I wasn\'t okay?
What would daddy do,
What would daddy say?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    I love it, it has so emotion, so much depth and passion, I think that maybe instead of swearing you could write something with more sence so it flows in with the emotion in the poem. It's great though.

    :)keep up the great work,
    your friend...
    alissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Tripp

    ...you're such an amazing poet. I love reading your stuff. I picture this being said in like a higher pitched voice, which only makes it sound better. Definitely one of your bests Ray.

    Tripp

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥Nikki♥

    Awe. this very good, darling.

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