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by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Nov 5, 2006


{{IF YOU DO NOT LIKE THIS POEM DO NOT COMMENT OR VOTE! THIS MEANS THE WORLD TO ME!}}

You can take away my dignity
And strip me of my pride
Try to break the spirit in me
But my heart will be my guide

You lie and bend your rules
To make me play your game
Taking away the ones I love
And give me all the blame

Always looking down upon me
Must make you feel srong
One day your time will come
When you realized you are wrong

God will be inside me
"He" will show me the way
To get me through this time
And home to you one day

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  • 18 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    This is my favourite poem of you by far! its very well written, has a nice rhyme ect! nicely done, oh, i set up a competition and was wondering if you would want to take part, i kinda see you in this one - http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=71146 - if you decide to enter!

    Narc xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this, it was my favourite of yours so far.
    The message behind the words was clear to see, and the whole poem was so powerful and moving.

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This is sad. It is really hard for me to comment on your poems because of the message at the top, it kind of interferes with my whole comment. But I really do think that this is very sad. Keep writing. But I must say that it is going to be very hard for you to get true comments and critique with the message you place above each one of your poems. I suggest you think about that.

    Best wishes
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Besides a spelling/punctuation mistake, this poem was really awesome. I'm glad I read it- it had perfect flow. GREAT! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Great poem! The only thing i noticed was that you spelt "strong" wrong... Other than that, amazing!

    xxEvilAngelxx

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