A Dream

by Idiosyncratic   Mar 19, 2004


Dizzy in a world of color
Float to a room like no other
Open the door to look inside
Behold, your imagination's pride
Swirling spirals
Glistening Fireballs
Tossing, twirling everythings
People are growing angel wings
Open your eyes and wonder why
Dreams aren't real--People would fly

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  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Open the door to look inside
    Behold, your imagination's pride

    such thoughts can be thought bout these two lines. i trully loved this poem. it was wonderful to read and made me think. well done. keep writing.

    5/5 David

  • 19 years ago

    by Esther

    I think this is good but you might want to change the last line 'Dreams aren't real--People would fly' i think you should change the o
    would to will, and put a but before people!! (soz just voicing my opinon!

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