Inside-out.

by Hannah Emellia   Nov 6, 2006


Torn to pieces,
For all to see,
All these stitches,
Show the inside of me,

So here I am,
Inside and out,
So you can see me,
If you have doubts,

He tore my heart in two,
But didn't just stop there,
He wanted everyone to see,
Just what he's done to me,

Now I cannot hide it,
Because lies just show the truth,
And even if I shout it,
You'll say it's pressures of our youth,

So you can see it,
But still you don't,
You believe me,
But still you wont.

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  • 19 years ago

    by WolfiePuP

    Love it!!!..
    its great!... i love the darkness in this poem
    good work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mistake

    Very well written. i really do like this one. would you mind if i used it for one of my classes as a poem i have to memorize? i am not taking any credit at all for writing it.

    x CheLs

  • 19 years ago

    by Riser

    Wow like this is very very very very good!lol yea i like the line"pressure of our youth" because thats like so0o0o0oo true!
    ~April~

  • 19 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    This is amazing, i love every image you use. well done xx

  • 19 years ago

    by xXxIf You Only KnewxXx

    Good job, i liked it. keep it up.

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