Stolen Innocence

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Nov 7, 2006


Surrounding my entire life
Memories of how
My innocence was stolen

Broken memories of you,
Corrupting every thought
You stole my innocence.

Kinda in the haiku[or senryu? i guess lol] format. =]

7/5/7, 7/5/7

i might add more laters, but tell me what you think of it so far. =]

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  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Erm...4/3 words! don't change it!

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This is good......& about my poem "President", yeah, I do feel that way.....I feel like, he has a hard job and he's doing the best he can, good job on this poem
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really liked this. Short, but intersting. I like this style of writing very much. Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I like it. I think that you should a little more to it to give it a little more depth. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child

    Very good. powerful and emotional. good job! keep adding on, cos it makes me want to know more!

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