Thunder

by NightKeeper   Nov 8, 2006


Thunder
Lightning strikes my heart
My tears are blown away
By the eastern wind
oh oh By the eastern wind
Suddenly
All the elements of the world
Are mixed into one
And here comes the sun
To brighten my day
To show me away

~*~ My Little sis is trying to write songs. This is the beginning of a song she is working on and she would really like it if people would comment and vote on it. Maybe even make some suggestions on how to better it. If you do this she would be forever grateful!!~*~

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  • 16 years ago

    by unique

    I think its really good