Why am I holding this?
Where did it come from?
Could it represent a kiss,
That could become?
Now she wants to have my heart,
As I once wanted hers
She was torn apart,
Because she could not find the words
These two stanzas do not fit as well as the others. But I love this poem. It seems so peaceful. Even in the setting of a cemetary, it gives sort of a cherubic atmosphere, hence the angel. I love it. Amazing.
I enjoyed this, it was original in theme and concept which is always nice.
I thought the flow was off in one or two places, but apart from that, I found this very enjoyable.
You have true talent.
P.S I just got the comment now.