Mirror

by Bullets Are My Best Friend   Nov 10, 2006


She looks in the mirror and what does She see,
a girl with no love and alone she must be.

The one thing she always wanted
was love, happiness and laughter,
but all thats going for her is sadness and life getting much harder

She pulls a knife and cuts her wrist and spreads the blood all over the mirror.

Shes dying inside she needs That one special someone to love, to care, to respect her.

But at the moment all she wants to do is die slowly from her wrists

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  • 15 years ago

    by Obscura

    I like this poem its got feeling and meaning and i liked it

  • 17 years ago

    by jamie

    Hey i like this poem its very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Tis pretty good. Maybe make 'em a little longer. Add more story to it. Such as:

    She looks in the mirror...
    What does she see?
    A girl with no love,
    alone she must be.

    She only wants,
    A few little things.
    To live and laugh,
    and even to sing.

    But all that's going,
    is sadness and strife.
    All she wants,
    is a better life.

    Pulling out a blade,
    she cuts her wrist.
    Spreads blood on the mirror,
    And clenches her fist.

    NEW PART!!

    On the mirror,
    she wrote a letter.
    "I couldn't live this life,
    I think Death is better."

    Back to Poem:

    She's dying inside.
    She wants one love.
    She thinks this as,
    She drifts up above.

    Her world is fading,
    with her last breath,
    she simply whispers,
    "Here comes Death."

    See, add a little structure and a little more rhymes and you got it! If you like this 'new part' go ahead and put it in. Put it all in if you like, I'm only here to help.

    5/5

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