WOW...well written..i kinda know how you feel
auna

Excellent poem
well written
i love it that u write sad poems
i'm gonna add u to my favourites...

5/5
ps- read my poem murder or suicdie... u'll love it.. pls vote & comment i'll return the favour

Love
amy

I'm listening to 'Everybody's Fool' by Evanescence... it fits perfectly with this poem... :)

Its AMAZING! Kudos for the genre. Love sad.dep.dark poems. >:) I'm adding this as one of my favorite poems. Loved the story line, loved the rhyming, loved the flow.

EXCELLENT job!
5/5

Well done. story it told was good, rhymed well, so sad, i loved it.
keep writing, my friend
xxxxx

I loved this, it was filled with emotion and meaning.
I enjoyed the flow, rhyme scene and imagery.
I particulalrly liked the last stanza.

Truly a grand poem

Amazing job!
I loved the words you chose, it just made it flow so well and the ryhmes were perfect. for me the last stanza just finished if of perfect i really love the wording in the first line it's amazing.
"Heart tangled in the horror of a shattered soul
Body goes numb and silent, hands shaking cold
Judged her by only, the broken mess they see
They do not realize that, they're still looking at me."

Althought it was alot like other poems it still stood out and was beautiful! great job 5/5

That was really good , me liked . Keep up the great work mami .

Yo that poem was great so deep so much feeling. you will become a great poet one day!

Wow that was amazing! You're a very good poet, what an emotional poem, keep up the good work... don't ever lose touch with your emotions... that's what keeps us going!

All I can say is wow. That is one of the best poems I've read. It gave me the chills. I love it.

~Katie~

A brilliant poem. you had me gripped from the first line. great job xx

This poem is wonderful, filled with feeling and things that the reader can understand. Good job.

Very well written, I loved it.

5/5

It was an excellent read, I especially loved the use of third person, it had a interesting impact. I don't really understand the use of the comma in the second last line of the poem, unless you meant it as a pause?

I enjoyed it. Keep up the great writing, I'd love to read more.

Great poem:)

This is a beautifully written poem. I'm not talking in the sense, but you did a wonderful job! This girl's pain..you displayed it with such superiority, it's amazing. Kudos all the way!

I like this.

WOW!!!!! really good writing. there are alot of talented writers here, but you stand out. Well done
-xXx-

Oh my gosh! i loved it! youre such a great writer! 5/5 =]