Meagan

by DJ Lansing   Nov 11, 2006


I told you all my secretes
I shared all my pain
You listened to everything
And did your best to help

Now I am looking back
Wondering why you never
Told me to be quiet
Even after I put so much stress on you

Now I realize all the pain and stress
I have caused, I am regretting it now
If I had known I would have kept it
All to myself no matter what happened

If I could go back
I would not have depended on you so much
I would not have made you worry
I feel bad and I am sorry for worrying you

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  • 19 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    My littl ebaby all grown up! lol its really good except "secretes" is spelled "secrets".

    Also in the second line you should have a semi-colon (;) after back. "even after" doesnt flow right, i would change it to "when", but its your decsion.

    Third stanza, after "caused" it should be a semi-colon. and a comma after myself.

    Last stanza is great except "feel bad" seems really "sub-quality", id look for a good synonym to help the flow

    {4/5}

    [PygmyPuff]

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