Mistakes in life

by DJ Lansing   Nov 11, 2006


As I look all around me
All I see is an ocean of people
They are all staring at me
With horrific looks on their faces

I look at my hands and see
A strange liquid staining them
My eyes widen, my mouth drops
What have I done?

I look at the floor
All I see is a shiny liquid
The flood is stained red like my hands
I take a better look at the floor

There underneath all the blood
Lies a knife stained up to the hilt
I feel something running down my arm
Tears roll down my face as I realize what I’ve done

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  • 19 years ago

    by LadyWaszky

    A few mistakes Deej. But a good poem. a lil repetitive but u got talent. =]

    x♥x:Lauren

  • 19 years ago

    by TaKe Me As I Am

    Very well written, and very heartfelt. 5/5

    *just to help you out though..
    I look at the floor
    All I see is a shiny liquid
    The FLOOD is stained red like my hands
    I take a better look at the floor

    *im pretty sure you meant FLOOR instead of FLOOD :-D

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