Extremes

by AloneInMySarrows   Nov 12, 2006


It's too heavy, I scream.

This burden weighing me down.

It's too heavy, I yell.

My arms falling to the ground.

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It's too much,

My life is passing me by.

It's too much,

I'm afraid I'm going to cry.

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It's just too hard,

To go on day after day,

It's just too hard,

For anyone listening, I say...

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It's too overwhelming,

To think ahead each day.

It's too overwhelming,

To think I will be fine someday!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    ...lost and subdued by your thoughts regarding the future?

    This certainly grabbed my interest. While reading this piece, I remembered the line of a particular book that I just read recently. It says, "The present is a gift. That is why the present is called the present." =] One doesn't have to linger in the past nor does one have to think about the uncertain future. It is uncertain, unless one focuses on the present moment...

    I quite enjoyed reading this piece. My pleasure to read. Nice work, nonetheless! xD

    Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent poem I loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    I so love this one, the flow is good and the rhyming is done quite good too, it somehow made me smile at the end of the poem even though its a sad poem, oh well im kind of strange^_^ 5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Oooh. Very pretty. I'm lovin' it, yo. =)
    5/5 It may be sad, but it made me happy.

    On your profile I think you spelled Liars wrong. Sorry if you meant something else.

  • 17 years ago

    by dying beauty

    I really liked this one its ur best

    -dying beauty
    sherri

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