WHO WILL?

by Karl Wild GG23   Nov 13, 2006


Who will stop my tears
That are flowing deep inside
Who will stop my tears
And give my emotions a place to hide

Who will end my pain
I cannot hurt anymore
Who will end my pain
And help me off the floor

Who will stay forever
Always be right by my side
Who will stay forever
No matter how rough the ride

Who will ease my pain
Be my blanket when I am cold
Who will ease my pain
And love me until I grow old

Who will be my eyes
When it's dark and I can't see
Who will be my eyes
And set my soul free

Who will break these chains
That bind my hands and feet
Who will break these chains
So I can have back my freedom and my peace

Who will hold my hand
As I walk down this crowded street
Who will hold my hand
So that I can be complete

Who will take my heart
And handle it with care
Who will take my heart
And always be there

Who will give me strength
When I am no longer strong
Who will give me strength
If something ever goes wrong

Who will give me life
When my heart can beat no more
Who will give me life
And be the ocean to my shore

Who will give me love
Fight for me and bleed
YOU will give me love
And your the only thing I need

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  • 16 years ago

    by oksana

    I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney

    'YOU will give me love
    And your the only thing I need'
    ^favorite lines. Very strong! This is yet another amazing poem. I love it!
    5/5
    *Brittney

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    Aww i loved thiss!!! its soo sweet, and the flow is amazingg

    Who will stay forever
    Always be right by my side
    Who will stay forever
    No matter how rough the ride

    ^ i loved that stanzaa... its soo great, and the word choice is amazingg.. keep writing and ill keep reading... 5/5 from me, and thanks for the commentt :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Awww i really like this.. im surprised not a lot of people have commented on this one..its really sweet.. i like the repetition too... also.. after reading your new stuff and reading your old stuff i can see how much you really have improved.. your new stuff is amazing .. you really did improve.. just thought i'd let you know that =]... keep up the good work and i'll keep reading ur stuff .