This Secret Can Kill

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Nov 14, 2006


No, your right, I am not tough
Yes, every night I cry
No I will not tell you
Why each night I want to die

You see, Ive got this secret
Its one I'll die to hide
Its one of shame, hate and regret
And It will stay hidden deep inside

Its full of pain and misary
Full of memories I wont forget
The pictures running through my head
Of so many decisions I regret

Mabye If I drank a little less
Or followed my parents rules
Mabye I wouldnt fake my smile
And still be a innocent little girl

Mabye I wouldnt be this broken
Or have gone against what i believe
Mabye Id still be daddy little girl
And I wouldnt want to leave

And mabye I'll never be perfect
And mabye I'll always cry
But please God, I'm begging you
Please dont let me die

~All Comment Will Be Returned~
~She Died Screaming

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Aww, this poem is great! I love how you describe everything so perfect, and your vocabulary is amazing!

    Maybe this stanza needs some help:
    Its full of pain and misary
    Full of memories I wont forget
    The pictures running through my head
    Of so many decisions I regret

    BTW you spelt misery wrong.

    Other than that

    It was Excellent!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Silentblond

    So much pain, so much hidden fear and grief. God is here for you, don't build the pain up inside. God loves you, secret or no secret.

  • 17 years ago

    by Caytii

    Great poem..i loved it! so much emotion..keep writing thats really good.
    katie

  • 17 years ago

    by DaddysLittlePrincess

    Wow i love it! my favorite part:

    Mabye I wouldnt be this broken
    Or have gone against what i believe
    Mabye Id still be daddy little girl
    And I wouldnt want to leave

    ONE of my favorites!!!

    -Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Aww that's really sad, I loved the last stanza the best.. I can really relate to it.. The flow and rhthym was really good, there were a couple of slight spelling errors but other than that.. well done 5/5 xx

    P.S Hope ya don't mind me pointing them out..
    2nd stanza 'Ive'... I've
    3rd stanza 'misary'... misery
    4th n 5th stanza... 'mabye'... maybe

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