Left Me .

by BrokenREALiTy   Nov 14, 2006


Emotionally lost,
And physically weak.
You wanna know why,
But my tears can't speak.

Completely torn,
Left with a painful scar.
Quietly crying,
You've gone too far.

Shrieking in pain,
With eyes completely blurred.
Future ruined,
And a dream deferred.

Smile askew,
And a laugh so fake.
Don't know how much more,
Of this I can take.

Vision fogged up,
And my hands ice cold.
They aren't warm anymore,
Without yours' to hold.

Lips chapped,
With skin so pale.
No reason to smile,
When life's gone stale.

Quietly watching,
As they lower your body.
Tossing in a rose,
Can't believe you left me.

Screaming in distress,
Completely torn apart.
Silently sobbing,
With pain in my heart.

Reminiscing the memories,
I can still see your smile.
I'll be seeing you soon,
Just wait a little while.
[c] 2O06 Mindy Huang

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mia

    Wow... speechless is the right word.
    thank you for sharing

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I love your poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    WOW! That was incredible! There was so much emotion in every word that it shocked me and made me what to keep reading. I REALLy love this one, and I'm going to add it to my favorites :D
    The stanzas worked really well also, so keep it up, and if it was possble, 6/5

    Hatori

    P.S. Thanks for the RRC :D

  • 16 years ago

    by ChaoticallyMe

    Reminds me of "Left" by me :D Good stuff.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oh, wow!
    I know I have commented a lot but I just have to have something to read and I like your poems, so anyway!

    This was so sad. The imagery was amazing. I could feel every single emotion that you were trying to get out. Just simply amazing!
    Wonderful job! Keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie