Time

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Nov 15, 2006


Tick-
The chimes sound.
Tock-
Time is found.
Tick-
Blank eyes stare.
Tock-
Time is rare.
Tick-
You'll think twice.
Tock-
Pay the price.
Tick-
Precious time.
Tock-
At its prime.

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  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Bravo, I must say. You did an excellent job on making your own stlye for this piece. It was different, but in a good way.

    The 'Tick-tocks' in between the lines was truly brilliant lol. I loved it. ^_^ It brought out a lot to the poem. The flow was excellent with the parts in between the 'Tick-tocks' and the imagery was great. I really understood what you were trying to say. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

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