Wax Butterflies

Very short and sweet. my only problem is Are, & our coming right after eachother. it hurt my mouth trying to pronounce them . lol. i would try to switch the wording a little there. but it was a cute short poem. good job. =]

I liked this.
I don't think it was one of your best, but it was still an enjoyable read.

:) heehee that was good. nothing much to say, but that was great for such a short thing! 5/5
Emmmm**

My butterfly used to shine, I like it
= D
teak xxx

Very short, simple. I love it though! I do like your dark poetry better, but this is still a great poem. I enjoyed the read =D 5/5, as always---