by jason Nov 16, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
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Sinking slowly through the bubble of fate |
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Gosh i hate change,,i hate it wit a passion it seems so unpredictable...but this poem makes it seem life life threatening, way to soften up even the most despised and hurful subjects...:) |
by Brittany C
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Very good poem another 5/5 |
by DeepSoul
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GOOD JOB!!! it has a lot of feel to it! it flows really well too! :D keep it up! and let me know when you write more! |