Clouds [Haiku]

by Tammie   Nov 16, 2006


Clouds begin to brew
Hinting a ferocious storm
Growling with fury.

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Haiku is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5). Haiku is usually written in the present tense and focuses on nature.

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  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful job. As usual, there isn't much to say about this style, though I think you can make the last line stronger. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    A wonderful read.
    You have captured brewing clouds perfectly.
    Well done Tammie !