Holy Moly. Good lord Honey. This poem was VERY strong. WOW! I felt the power come through it. it was lovely. Well actually. it was drasticlly perfect. I LOVED IT!!!

P.s. YOU ARE SOOOOOOOOOO NOT COOLER THEN ME!

p.s.s You wouldnt want to see my smile right now. I am sidckkk and look dead! lol

Wow. fantastic poem, your language was very powerful and moving... love it all.

well done

xXx

Utterly brilliant. Really, you leave me with nothing more to say, than praise. Fantastic work!
P.S. Thank you for the lovely comment! ^^

Beautiful penned, well ryhme yet writing well with beautiful emotions....awesome penned!

Awesome poem

Wow.. this is really amazing. especially all the detail. great job!

Wow...this was very well done..i liked how you gave credit to the author that gave you the idea. I also liked the rhyme scheme. Overall, it was really good. Really different idea. 5/5

Fantastic. You put a lot of strong emotions in the poem. Simply marvelous writing done.

I held this gun like I held your hand
A warm feeling on the cold trigger

^ My favorite lines by far! Great job writing this one. You're a wonderful writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Tempted you were for the bullet,,,Then anger pointed its finger.

What was her reply?

Holy snap .
Talk about perfection, lovee` .
No other word to describe this .
I`m speechless .
Well done .
..ღ__MiNDYY

AMAZING. hav a strong meaning and very emotional. strong ending:)

Very intense. With poems like these I would love you hear your music.

Dang!!! Dude, I have to know,
So which word will you choose to say?

The first two lines are a work of art but
that last line gives me goose bumps.
Excellent read and no doubt a write for life,
Bogie

I really liked this poem. It was well written. Great job! Keep up the good work. Talk to you later. bye-bye

~!~*Annie*~!~

Graet poem :)

Wow, you had me gripped from the title and held my attention in such a way i was captivated... brilliant x

Holy goodness... i love this poem. this is sooo... GREAT!!! *favs*X2,000 I LOVE IT!!!

Wow simply amazing Darien!!! I am at a loss for words....

Now that was just amazing. I really liked how you got it to flow so perfectly, without making it seem forced. Excellent work. You're very good at poetry.

I really like the title that you chose for this. It's what made me really want to read the poem. The poem in itself was really good though. You had an amazing story line in this and it definitely kept my attention. My absolute favorite lines were:
I held this gun like I held your hand
A warm feeling on the cold trigger
That just had amazing descriptions in it and stood out to me the most. Great job on this! 5/5