Eros!

Short but straight to the point :) I like it ^_^ 5/5

Eros, let my heart be!
This love is slowly killing me
I'm poisoned by it's toxic taste
My sanity I've put to waste
To let you go is tearing me apart
There's nothing left to break, I lost my heart

I thought this was very good. Short but sweet.

It flows good. except the last line it breaks the flow up..

Good job. 5/5