Lost

by anna   Nov 22, 2006


What is it that I've lost ?
Like half of me is missing
Was I created this way
Half completed?
Or did I lose my self along this path
I cant remember anymore, the pain wont let me

You wont grieve for this absence, I KNOW!!!
Because ive been forgotten
And u cant find my missing parts
Though when im with you I feel whole

I bleed alone at night
And I no u couldnt care
I bleed for my missing half
Sometimes I think it was you I held there

But other times I hate you
For letting me sacrifice my self
My other self bound to your alter
My heart set upon your dusty shelf

Death was quick at least
I didnt even know it was over
By then it was too late
You had sunken your intoxicating fangs into my neck
And drank from the wound you had made

You left me half empty
And forever cursed
Craving the final bite
Where you can consume whats left of me
Then I might be whole once more

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "My other self bound to your alter
    My heart set upon your dusty shelf"

    Where do you find your inspiration?? This was really good with the idea's and images that were set in this piece.
    It seemed very sad and dark to me. Either catagory
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by anna

    Thanx 4 your comments guys... i write most my poem in word then copy paste into this site and sometimes using puctuation marks like ' in I've for example or (...) this site cant read it 4 some reason... so some times i leave em out to put in later but 4get... so mybad... i thought ppl would get tha idea behind tha poem even if its not the most grammatically correct...

  • 17 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    This does have potential, don't get me wrong, I just found it a bit difficult to read. I would suggest maybe using I've instead of ive and things like that so some people might not think you're trying to spell a word and missed a letter. I also think limit the use of exclaimation pars but again that's just my personal poetry pet peeve. Like I said it does have potential. You have osme interesting uses of expression here.

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