Moving On

by cassie   Nov 22, 2006


Daises and daffodils
Choking on this chain
Lyrics of the music world
Silently going insane

Thunder rapids
And water sweats
My recent past
Im not going to forget

I did the right thing
Although you hate me now
Someday hopefully soon
You wont be such a cow

Youll realised I helped
Little I can do
I needed some extra support
And you also did too

Screaming clouds
With no silver lining
My reality
Im slowly finding

My heart jumps a beat
My eyes shine with glee
My smile finally true,
Soon I hope to be me

The me I like
The me I love
The me I always hoped,
Would shine from above.

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  • 16 years ago

    by kia

    This one was really insightful of how im feeling now. Kind of the feeling you get after you hit rock bottom but you realise you're going to have to crawl back up, but when you do theres a chance or a hope that you'll be stronger then before. Kia xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by RachelAnne

    Well, thank you for your comment. your poems are great.. i love them all

  • 17 years ago

    by Tasha

    5/5 great poem, even though I don't fully understand what the poem is about. But thats not what writing is about, its about expressing, and thats what you did. I am adding you to my fav.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robiie

    Youll be all you want to be sweetie x0x0

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