A thousand words

by Karl Wild GG23   Nov 23, 2006


A thousand words could not describe you,
Or even begin to tell the tale,
Beauty not even a blind man could subdue,
With a million bumps of braille.

I could never tell you how I feel,
Because you take my breath away,
Like a dream it seems so surreal,
That I wake up next to you everyday.

I cherish every second together we spend,
I'll never take you for granted,
Your not only my lover, but my best friend,
You keep me stable in a world so slanted.

You're the answer when I have no clue,
My life, my heart, my dream,
I get lost in your eyes so blue,
Lost into a love so extreme.

A thousand words could not describe you,
Or our love so real,
When I say I love you it's true,
What are the one thousand words you feel?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I really loved the last few poems I read and now am skimming through some of your other poems. This was just so beautiful. Expressing a love so deep and real.

    It might take me awhile, but I'll have to read through more of your poems. You're very talented.

    PS: Nice pic.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Patience

    What a beautiful poem! It’s not a thousand words, but just enough to melt any girl’s heart. : )

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought this was really sweet.
    I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and imagery.
    I thought the flow was off in a couple of places, but apart from that, as usual, a wonderful write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    This is so true, when you find the one you truely love she/he really does take your breath away. beautiful write, loved it... thanks for you comment on mine

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