Who needs you?

by Rose Noble   Nov 23, 2006


You brought me down too low.
Now I'm gonna crack.
I used to love you.
You used to love me back.

I wont kiss up to you.
That's the end of that.
All I can say about you is shoo,
I don't love you.'

What can I do?
What can I say?
Honey, all you can do is shut up.
All you can do is pray.

Hope you find another girl,
Hope she doesn't get hurt.
Hope she's shy,
Cause all you do is lie.

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  • 3 weeks ago

    by Sandra Mansur

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading your poetry. Your words create such strong emotions, but I felt they could become even more powerful with visuals.

    I’m a freelance artist with 3 years of experience, and I can turn the feelings and imagery in your poems into illustrations so readers can actually see the words come to life. We could even start with one poem or a few stanzas as a small project.

    I’d also love to share a few ideas on how visuals could help you reach a wider audience and create another way to benefit from your poetry.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Overpeck

    This is soo sad... But I love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Rose Noble

    Thanks. =3

    My love life is like..curplunk. ><

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy

    Thx for the comment!
    i really like this poem. its like exactly like my luv life!! 5/5 from me!! <3333 it! keep up the good work!!

    <33333
    MaNdErZzZ

  • 19 years ago

    by Rose Noble

    Hey!! Thanks, Mandy.I'll take a look at your poems again. Seeya.

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