Deep in Thought

by The Lonely Rose   Nov 26, 2006


Why am I confused?
Shouldn't I be happy?
Why do I feel so down?
Why do I long for it to happen?
Will it happen?
Will my visions come true and set my fate for future time?
Is it just me?
Am I going mad?
is this all in my head?

Other thoughts flow into my mind?
Will my true love come to me?
Will he chose me?
If he doesn't chose me will I be alright?
Will he chose her over me?
If he doesn't chose me will my soul mate come to me?
Will I come to him?
Will my longing for love finally be fulfilled ?

Will I ever be successful in life also?
Will I ever have a good career?
Will I have a house?
Will I have a good husband with kids?
Will I ever live out my dreams and cry all this hidden pain away from me?

Thinking these thoughts..
Deep in thought...
Wondering
Spacing out
Not sleeping at night

Whats wrong with me...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rin

    Hun, all i can say is why are we sharing a life, no seriously i feel that way too. but good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by marcelah

    Wow. i loved it. it makes you think a lot about everything, about life. beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A sad one, but written so nicely,
    there been nites in my life when i had that kind of feelings........i know how it feel. great job once again. 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. this actually made me cry... I have thought almost all of those thoughts really late at night to the point where I don't sleep cause of it. I hope that you are ok :) But you did a really good job on this poem.. very well written. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was my favourite out of the three I've read of yours. I liked the questions asked in it, it gives off a worried, panicky atmosphere, which creates suspence and interesting. Very good.

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