by Karl Wild GG23 Nov 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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I used to think I had to die to see heaven, |
by Sara
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You see heaven's missing an angel, |
by Star
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That was beautiful. You are such a talented writer. 5/5 from me. |
by Cassie Cain
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Good poem |
by Fsams
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Wow excellent piece. The flow is flawless and each line is having a strong link between each other and the whole poem. This is sure 5/5worth |
by Vanessa
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The last staza was powerfully delivered, I really loved it, the rest of the poem was great, deep strong emtion, excellent flow and amazing word choice. Another job well done 5/5 |