A minute without you

by Karl Wild GG23   Nov 28, 2006


A minute without you,
Is 60 seconds to long,
Without you I feel sad and blue,
Without you I'm not strong.

I do what I can to make it by,
But the minutes seem like hours,
And it seems no matter how hard I try,
My heart, the sadness over powers.

Because I can't make it one day alone,
Without you next to me,
It's just not the same on the phone,
And I hope that you'd agree.

When we're apart I'm not the same,
Something inside of me is missing,
And I know this may sound lame,
But it all comes back when we start kissing.

I put my arms around you,
Smile and say hello,
I just don't know what I'll do,
When it's time for you to go.

I'll cherish our time together today,
Until our hours are through,
Because theres no price I wouldn't pay,
To not have to spend - A minute without you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bobbi

    This poem is so true! I haven't seen my boyfriend in almost a week and I've been going crazy! I actually called him and woke him up so he could hear it. Great job!

    ~Bobbi

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Aww, it was so sweet, the emotions in this were unbelievable i know how you feel with this stanza
    A minute without you,
    Is 60 seconds to long,
    Without you I feel sad and blue,
    Without you I'm not strong

    60 seconds feels like forever. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    I miss that feeling....
    its amazing what poetry is it lets us release feelings into words i can tell that you did that here great job

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Aawwww 5/5.. i can soo relate to this and a lot of other people probably can to.. when ur not with the one you love minutes seem like hours and days seem like years.. it is just amazing what someone else can do to you and you really did a great job writing about it and describing that feeling.. i think our writing styles have a few things in common lol.. great job and thanks for the comment =]

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