I Won't.

by Void   Dec 4, 2006


Someone special once told me,
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn,
is just to love and be loved in return."
-Well I guess I've got the first part figured out.

I've grown up in a world, when I was always reminded:
"Rely only on yourself,
you can't see the truth in everyone else."
-My memory seems to be failing me.

No matter what world I'm dwelling,
Even ones within my dreams,
People always tell me,
'Love is all you need'.
Yet somehow, my love is not enough.

But I've given you too much of myself, to let you walk away.
I won't give up yet.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I really enjoyed this poem. It was written wonderfully, i really enjoyed the style of it. You used quotes that weve all probably heared of, and made them into a great poem! It had a good flow, and you could imagine someone saying all those quotes. It also had a great ending, powerful. Keep it up, looking forward to reading more! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Hey This is Charisma*. I wanted to say thanks for the comments you left, but I was wondering if you were going to do the final three. I hadn't seen them, and was just wondering. Thank you though for the EXTREMELY in depth comments thus far, and I look forward to more!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I know this is the last comment I'm supposed to give for the contest but I'll definately be back to comment on more. Great job and I look forward to reading more. I love your work.
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I just wanted to say you gave me the LONGEST quote i KNOW i've ever gotten, and I've ever seen on this site. But it was much appreciated, and I did change one of the lines, not with what you used, though it was an excellent suggestion, but I wanted it to come from me. I'm going to have to reread it to know what else I should change, and I totally understand how you can love a poem, but still see what needs to be changed, so I will do the same for you if ever I notice anything. Thank you,
    Charisma*
    P.S. I did like this poem! lol is it too late to say that!?! lol

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Hey, thanks a lot for your comment. It's refreshing to not get a one-liner. Though I did forget...what contest was it that you held?

    Great job!
    The style is different and unique. I love how you put quotes in it. I agree with most of the content. Keep it up

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